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CRITIQUE
YOUR POETRY
1. Plan
2. Write
3. Check
1. Plan
With whichever poem, it is very important to get a
"well-rounded feel" for what the poem is generally all about and what
the poet is trying to achieve. Read the poem several times, if possible coming
back to it over a period of days. At GCSE level, most poems you will study have
several "layers" of meaning so you must consider both the "surface" and the "deeper" levels within the poem.
The poet's intention
in writing the poem will have developed out of some motivation or inspiration (i.e. why the poet felt it important to write about
this subject). You must try to develop insights into what this motivation might have been.
This motivation may well relate in some way to the context in which the poet lived and
wrote - the effect of time, place and situation. Think about the way the poet might have reacted to the
ideas and general beliefs that prevailed in the society in which the poet
lived. Make notes of the ideas, feelings (i.e. moods and tones of voice)
and images the poem creates as
it progresses and its meanings develop. Especially notice how these ideas and
images are sequenced and are built up - this forms the structure of the poem. Look at each image or idea and work out how it was created (i.e. the methods or techniques the poet has used for the reader to respond to); ask
yourself, why such methods and
structures might have been chosen. You should also consider if particular
fashions in writing (called literary
traditions) are obvious within the poem. These may have influenced the form or style (see below) the poet chose for the poem in a way that is
important to its overall effect or meaning (hint: this may be difficult - often
such things may only be discernible to a more experienced reader of poetry).
As complex as many poems may seem to be, a poet's raw
materials are simple enough: nothing more than words. And - believe it or not -
words have just two main
qualities that poets can put to use: form
and content.
FORM and CONTENT
This is a useful way of considering the effects that are
possible using words. You will read below what each term means, but you should
realise that - in reality - the two are intimately combined and cannot be truly
separated. However, they are a helpful way of looking at the effect words can
be used to create meaning.
What is FORM?
Form is a technical word used to describe what something
looks or sounds like. This could be the way a poet uses lines or stanzas (i.e.
verses) to add to the meaning or impact of the poem in some way. Form does not
change the meaning of a word but it can add something useful to the meaning or
visual impact of the poem. Form is to do with the SHAPES and SOUNDS of words and
poets are very good at using PATTERNS OF SHAPE AND SOUND to help them make more
meaningful poems.
Poets use the form when they use different lengths of
line, stanzas and poems - also when they end a line in the middle of a
sentence; they also use form when they use the patterns of sound words make,
such as rhythm (i.e. by
repeating a sequence of stresses), rhyme
(i.e. by repeating a sequence of final sounds), alliteration (i.e. by repeating a sequence of initial consonants),
assonance (by repeating a
sequence of inner vowel sounds) and onomatopoeia
(by using a word that sound like what it means).
Here are some more examples of the way a poet can use the
form of words:
·
Sentence style and length: extra short
("minor") sentences can stand out and seem more like real speech
patterns;
·
Line endings;
·
Using a traditional, rather formal sounding
rhythm such as "iambic pentameter";
·
Creating a natural pause between words
(called a caesura);
·
Running a sentence on beyond its line or
stanza (called enjambment);
·
Using a traditional form such as a sonnet.
·
Using formal looking arrangements of stanzas
or verses.
What is CONTENT?
The content of a word, phrase or sentence is the meaning
it contains. Poets choose their words very precisely and structure them with
care to increase their effect and meaning to suit their purpose best. Remember
that some words and phrases can have more than a surface meaning. All words
have a basic meaning (which is known as the word's denotation; what a word denotes
can be found in a dictionary). But some words, especially when used in
particular contexts or ways, have extra "layers of meaning". These
"associated meanings" are called the connotation of the word, i.e. what it connotes or suggests). Imagine the meaning of the word
"rose" to a gardener (which would be its denotation) and the meaning to a lover (which would be its connotation). Connotation is the
lifeblood of poetry. Poets use connotation when they choose words or phrases that
"paint pictures" or create a strong image or feeling. The use of
metaphor and personification are ideal ways to create strong images. This kind
of language is called "figurative language". Another use of
connotation is irony. This is
when the poet says one thing, but the reader detects that what he or she means
is something rather different (sarcasm is a rather offensive or coarse kind of
irony intended to hurt someone's feelings). When a poet uses connotation, the
reader becomes naturally more involved with the words of the poem because their
mind is caused to do a little extra "work" in finding the meaning and
this deepens the effect the poem creates.
What is STYLE?
Style refers to the way a writer chooses suitable and effective
language for a particular purpose and audience. When you discuss
"style", you are looking for and commenting on only the particular
choices of words and phrases (which must be something to do with the way they LOOK,
SOUND or MEAN) that the poet seems to have made to add to the overall effect or
meaning of the poem.
TIP: Imagining
yourself in the poet's place, time and situation can help you to develop the insights
needed to provide answers to the
all-important questions: why (reasons and intentions) and how (reasons and methods).
2. Write
v Read the question with great care and make sure you
highlight its key parts or bullet points as these must be covered in your answer.
v Begin to tackle the question immediately, avoiding waffle and wasted words:
simply state which poems you are writing about and how they will help you answer
the question; next, briefly summarize what each poem is about generally (its theme) and specifically (its content); end the first paragraph by briefly
suggesting what each poet's overall message for their poems is and why you feel
the poets were motivated to write about these subjects in this way.
v If you intend writing a thesis essay, now is the time to
state your thesis.
v Spend the remainder of your essay exploring the poet's
methods (see above) in a way that allows a full answer to the question to
develop. If your essay is a thesis essay, the remainder of the essay should be
used to support your thesis by providing analysis, evidence and insight from
within the poems.
v Conclude by restating the main point of the essay and by summarizing
your major points (but keep this short and avoid repeating them in exactly the
same way). Finish with a brief statement of your personal interest in the poets
and their poems.
v You will probably be asked to compare two or more poems
in your GCSE examination. Remember that when you compare and contrast poems, it
is best to write about similar or contrasting ideas or methods side by side as
you progress (i.e. you use each paragraph to covers a similar aspect or part of
each poem). This can be difficult, however; an alternative approach is to write
about the first poem in full, then move on to the second. As you write about
the second, you can then compare and contrast it to the first and so on. If
even this proves difficult, you can write about each poem and in your final
paragraphs compare and contrast them - never
fail to compare and contrast when you are asked to write about more than one
poem.
3. Check
Read
each sentence after you have written it: Write using
a variety of sentence types and styles but remember especially that shorter
sentences are
often more interesting because they are crisper and clearer. An
occasional ultra-short sentence can add real impact to writing. Never fail to re-read your
sentences after writing them to check that they are complete in their sense, accurate
in their grammar and spelling and follow on logically and smoothly from the
last.
Check
every paragraph: A paragraph is a written discussion that
covers a single topic - one topic among the many that are needed to
cover the subject matter of the whole piece of writing. One of the sentences in
the paragraph,
and quite often the first one, is called the "topic sentence".
This is the sentence that introduces, or tells "in a nut shell", what the
paragraph is going to be about. The remaining sentences do no more than expand and
explore the ideas raised by the topic sentence in more depth. No points that
are unrelated to the main topic should be covered in the same paragraph.
Each
paragraph should flow smoothly from its predecessor. This is achieved by the
use of a subtle "hook sentence" at the end of the paragraph; this is
a sentence that "hooks" into the new topic of the next paragraph. To correct a missed paragraph simply put this
mark where you want in to be: // then,
in your margin write: // = new paragraph. The examiner will not mark you down
for this so long as you have not
forgotten all of your paragraphs.
Examine
each comma: Over, or misuse, of commas is a common and
important error that can lose many marks. Many of you will occasionally use a comma instead
of a full stop to end some of your sentences. You are failing to recognize
where the end of the sentence should have been. Because too much of this leads
to a dreary and
difficult-to-read style because it destroys the clarity and crispness
that is a necessary part of all good writing.
A sentence is a group of words that is about one main
idea or "thought". It should seem "complete" to its reader.
Sentences that drift into several ideas, or which seem incomplete, are less
clear and interesting to read. Ending a sentence with a comma (or even nothing
but a space) instead of a full stop will allow it to "run on" or
drift in this way. Try to use commas only to mark off parts of a sentence so that the sentence reads more smoothly or
makes clearer sense.
Look
at every apostrophe: Look at the words you have used that end in
"s". Are they all plurals? If so the chances are they do not need an
apostrophe. Apostrophes are used to show when a letter has been missed out (as
in: shouldn't) and when two nouns belong to each other (as in: the school's
entrance). Also... make sure that when you write, "it's" you do mean, "it is" (as in it's cold) not "belonging to it" (i.e. as in: its
surface).
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